My First Posting

This my first post. I made it in the Intensive Course class, it's about problems in my city.

I will tell about problems in my city. In my city, there are too many things that should be improved. There are too many motorcycles in my city. The street always crowded especially during rush hour. It makes the air pollution more terrible. And also, there aren’t  enough parks to takes children. People usually take their children to the department stores. It spends too much money.

          So, what should we do about these problems? I think there should be more public transportation and less personal vehicles. And we also need more police officers to organize the traffic. They could decrease traffic jams. Besides that, the city should build more parks to take children and people don’t need to spend too much money. They could save their money to something useful.